The
Stranger In The Mirror
by
Eva B, Devon, England, Age 14
Victoria slipped in to the white lacy wedding dress and looked in
to the mirror, she blinked as she thought that she saw a second reflection
of a solemn girl about her age in the mirror, she seemed to be whispering
something, Victoria span around but the reflection faded away. The
mirror had been a wedding gift from her Grandma. It was gilt-frame
with an inscription at the top.
For she who looks from the mirror
Can make all her dreams come true.
Victoria never understood this, but knew it was an antique and very
expensive, beside she loved the mirror. She span around in her lace
white dress for the last time and laid it over her chair. Quickly
she dressed and ran out to meet her fiancé, Herbert, whom in
a week she would be married to, so in love with him, was she that
she didn't see the horse charging down the street.
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Vicky ripped open the gift, she knew what it was, her Mum always had
it hanging her room, it was a family heirloom pasted down to the daughters
a week before their wedding day or 21st birthday and now it was her.
It was first given to Vicky's great-great-great-Grandma Victoria (who
she was named after), but she tragically died in an accident knocked
down by horse and cart, leaving behind a fiancé and 3-week-old
daughter. Vicky's face lit up as she looked at the gold mirror with
its strange inscription. She rushed to her room and hung it on the
wall, just then the door bell rang, Vicky rush to the door and saw
her best friend Kate standing there smiling, looking agitated.
" Hurry up! Aren't you ready yet? You didn't forget, did you,
you know we're going to buy you birthday dress, I can't believe you
left it this late, we've only week and we better start shopping,"
Vicky smiled as her friend rambled on.
"We've gotta get, new dress, new shoes, new jacket, new bag and
we haven't even started on my clothes and that'll take hours!"
"No, I didn't forget and you know why I left it so late, it's
tradition not to buy the dress before you get the mirror and its bad
luck too!" said Vicky looking a little annoyed.
" Well, I'd dread to think what bad luck's like in your family,
your Aunt's divorced, your Mum fell river and nearly drowned before
her wedding, your Grandma was in a near fatal fire accident in her
house just before her honeymoon, oh yeah and did I mention your sister..."
Kate responded hotly.
" Okay! Okay! I get the idea maybe we do have more than our fair
share of bad luck, just lets go get the dress" replied Vicky
calmly
" ... And the shoes and the..."
"Just get in the car, Okay!" Vicky cut Kate off before she
went in to another rampage.
By the time the shops had closed Vicky and Kate had bought all they
had need and had spent all of their money. Vicky ran in to show her
mum what she had bought; it was a long, low cut, ballroom dress in
pale blue with cream edge on the top and the bottom with a cream bag
and shoes to match. Kate had a very short and slinky dress in black,
also with matching bag and shoes- totally inappropriate for Vicky's
21st birthday ball. Vicky's mum looked at Kate's dress and sighed,
"Oh, well! There's always tomorrow."
Vicky and Kate laughed and agreed to go shopping the next day. Vicky
walked up to her room climbed into bed.
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Vicky woke up and saw the dress, she slipped in to the pale blue ballroom
dress and looked in to the mirror, she blinked and thought that she
saw a second reflection of a sad girl about her age in the golden
mirror, she seemed to be whispering something, Vicky span around but
the reflection faded away. Vicky twirled around in her dress for the
last time until her birthday and laid it over her chair. Quickly she
dressed and ran out to meet Kate.
"Where have been, we've gotta get, another new dress, bag and
shoes we haven't even started and it's, oh, 9:30, I'd better get ready"
panicked Kate as opened the door,
"Well, good morning to you, too." replied Kate sarcastically.
Four hours later Vicky and Kate arrived home, Vicky with a very short
and slinky dress in red with matching bag and shoes for the after
party disco and Kate with a low cut, ballroom dress in pale amber
with matching bag and shoes for the ball. They said theirs goodbyes,
after finally receiving Vicky's mums' approval of the dresses.
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Vicky couldn't wait for her birthday and slipped into the dress once
again, she looked in to the mirror and saw the reflection once again,
it was a young woman dressed in a white lacy wedding dress. Vicky
closed her eyes and put her hands up to the mirror and felt a cold
tingling feeling, as she was being pulled into the mirror. Vicky opened
her eyes to find her-self in a church, at funeral she walked up to
the coffin and peered in, she stepped back in shock it was her great-great-great-Grandma
Victoria. Suddenly she felt a cold shiver down her spine and she was
looking up at her-self and she couldn't move it was then she realised
why.
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Victoria was in her body! Suddenly Vicky saw visions of this happening
before, to her great-great-Grandma, to her great-Grandma, her Grandma,
Aunties, other female members of her family- all of whom had inherited
the mirror and then last of all she saw her mum, it was then she understood
about her Aunt's divorce, her Mum's fall in the river, her Grandma's
near fire in her house- all were engaged or married, could it be that
Victoria was jealous and angry because she never got married or even
reached her 21st birthday and now Vicky wouldn't either. She was stuck;
she couldn't scream or call out, trapped in a silent world. Then she
became aware of the fact that she could try and telepathically speak
to Victoria- after all she was in her body and visa-versa, Vicky lay
there thinking
' Stop! Why are you doing this? '
Over and over again until eventually she got the indignant reply of,
' Because I deserve to marry Herbert, not you! I deserve to live to
my life with him and my daughter, if it wasn't for me you would never
be born!'
'How can you marry Herbert now, he's been dead for years! He's probably
waiting for you in heaven! It was you who broke up my Auntie and tried
to drown my mum and tried to burn down my Gran's house! Why don't
you stop cursing my family and leave us alone, you're dead now! Why
do you have to torture this family any more?'
'If I can't marry happily why should you?'
'Because this family suffered enough! Just forget about it and go
to heaven, where you belong with Herbert, because you don't belong
here any more!'
And with that, Vicky found herself flung onto her bed back in her
own body, she looked at the mirror, walked over, picked it up and
flung it out of the window. Early the next morning she crept downstairs
and picked up the broken pieces of the mirror, drove to the lake and
threw them all into the river. She drove home and climbed back into
bed. Later on she got up and went shopping with Kate, leaving behind
a broken window "from where the burglar broke in and stole her
mirror", she never told anyone about the 'curse' and when asked
why she didn't tell the police she would say "it had a crack
in it anyway". The family life carried on never having any more
problems and Vicky celebrated her 21st birthday in style and Kate
in a 'little black number'!
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The End
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