Friends
Through Thick And Thinby
Amy O, Portland, Oregon, USA, Age 16
It
was Tuesday, September 2nd and school had begun once again. The double
doors flew open and the commons area became flooded with students
of all years, sizes, statures, and races. Eventually several clusters
formed. Old friends greeted each other and new friends introduce themselves.
Students shuffled into classes and the first day of school began.
About a month had gone by and school went as quickly as it came.
The school had a dark depressing look. The building was painted a
toffee tan that had cracked and chipped over the years. The lawn was
kept well but there was no flowers of trees to be seen. Inside the
school, there was a commons area and several halls branching off of
it. The ceilings had water stains and gave off a musty moldy smell.
Few windows could be found in the school. Each class rooms had huge
heavy metal doors that creaked when opened of closed.
Sprinting up the stairs, with books in hand and a school bag swinging
from her shoulder, Ana frantically rushes to her first class. As she
turns the corner she runs right in to a tall boy with dark hair and
brilliant green eyes. Ana's books fall to the floor. She blushes as
her bag drops from her shoulder.
"My…my bad," Ana sheepishly replays.
"No, no, my fault," the boys says as he bends over to pick
up her books that had landed on the floor.
He returned her books to her and then said, "Hey. I'm Brody."
"I'm Ana," she replied. Brody smiled at her.
"We're gunna be late for class…," Ana reminded him.
"Right, well…I'll see ya around," Brody said.
"See ya." Ana replied as he slowly walked away. She turned
back around to see him round the corner.
After running in to each other, Ana and Brody could not get each other
out of their heads. A whole week went by before they saw each other
again. But soon they started seeing lots of each other and soon began
to hang out after school.
About two months had gone by since Brody and Ana had first met. Ana
noticed something about Brody was not right. He did not look himself.
Brody was not acting his usual self and would not talk to Ana. At
school when Ana asked what was up and if he were okay, Brody would
tell her that he did not want to talk about it, and that he was "fine".
Finally a day or two later, when Ana and Brody were not at school,
he told her that his best friend, Trig, had died unexpectedly in a
car accident. Brody had been devastated. He had lost his best friend.
Brody was extremely upset about Trig's death, but what made it even
worse was that he had got in a fight with Trig two weeks before the
accident and had not talked to him since the fight. Ana and Brody
spent the evening talking about it all. It was hard for Brody, but
it brought the two closer together. They talked about things that
were more important, meaningful, and personal then they had normally
ever discussed.
Talking really helped Brody get through the death of his best friend.
Back before Brody and Ana became close friends and even back before
they met, Brody had been friends with Trig. In fact, they had been
best friends for three and a half years. They did not have many classes
together in school but they still hung out all the time. They had
been over to each other's houses so much that both families considered
the other boy as "family". They knew everything that there
was to know about the other. At the end of summer before their junior
year, Brody and Trig got in a fight. Although it was a petty fight
and extremely unlike them, they both got highly upset. After the fight
about a week later Brody called Trig and left a message on his machine.
"Hey, Trig. This is Brody…haven't talked to ya in while.
Just calling to say whats up… (long pause) …Well, alright.
Give me a call if ya wanna hang out or songthin'…alright? Bye."
Trig never called Brody back.
School started and the busyness began. After Brody had met Ana, they
became friends quick. And although he had not talked to Trig in a
while he became preoccupied with his friendship with Ana. So he did
not think much of Trig not talking to him. He figured Trig would come
around eventually. When Brody got the news of the accident that Trig
had been in, he closed his eyes and pictured his best friend's face,
as if he had been with him just yesterday. He flashed back to many
of the resent "good times" they had had. Brody could not
believe that Trig, his best friend that he could remember so easily,
had died. Brody blamed himself for their fight that took place right
before school begun. He deeply regretted not calling a second time
and not trying harder to make things better between them towards the
end. Ana tried to comfort and help Brody. She always kept him thinking
on a positive note even thought such a horrible thing had occurred.
About a month and a half after the funeral of Trig, another major
event happened but this time it was in Ana's life. It had to do with
Ana's family, which consisted of her mother, father, her 6-year-old
brother, her 9-year-old brother, and her 14-year-old younger brothers.
Ana lived in a ranch style home. The color of the house was cheerful
yellow, bright enough to make fall still seem like summer. The front
yard and the back yard was about acre. In the front yard, which faced
a road, there was a bed of roses along the side of the house, each
revealing a different brilliant color in the spring. The back yard
was full of trees of all sorts. The trees were in blossom, each had
barely budded individual fruit. The grass was about five days over
grown. To the left of the back yard, a deck was connected to the house.
Ever since Ana could remember, her family had problems. Her father
had a nasty temper and when angered there was no telling for what
he might do. Her parent's marriage had been struggling for some time
and it was evident in the way they talked to each other. On one Saturday,
afternoon Ana's mother was finishing up some dishes in the kitchen,
Ana was fixing a sandwich on the kitchen counter and her brothers
were watching Saturday afternoon cartoons downstairs. There was an
awkward silence, because Ana's mother and father had just ended an
argument that morning. But that silence was shattered but a bark from
the family dog in the back yard.
"SHUT-UP! You stupid dog!" Ana's father yelled angrily at
the curious dog. He took one step out side and noticed a roll of duct
tape that was lying in the green grass gnarled and chewed from the
dog. He clenched his fists and swore under his breath. The dog approached
Ana's father, waging his tail and looking up at him with big brown
eyes. He abruptly backhanded the dog across the face. As the dog yelped
and trying to run, he quickly grabbed the dog by the head and started
shaking him angrily.
"WHAT THE HELL!!! NO, NO, NO, NO! How many times do I have to
tell you? DON'T CHEW UP MY SHIT!" Ana's father yelled as he gripped
hard on the dog.
Ana heard her dog yelp and ran towards the back door. "MOM!!
MOM!! Papa's hurting Cody!"
She ran outside yelling at her father. He dropped the dog hard, intending
to hurt it. Ana knelt and pulled Cody, the dog, to her, half hugging
him half petting him.
Ana yelled at her father, "O MY GOSH, How could you do that to
him. It wasn't his fault. YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE LEFT THE STUPID TAPE
OUTSIDE!!!!"
As she let the poor dog go, he bolted to hind in the bushes. Ana's
father grabbed her arm and yelled, "I'm so freakin' tired for
dealing with this shit!"
Ana yanked her arm away and said, "Don't cuss at me! I don't
wanna hear it!" Just then her father pulls his hand back then
sharply hit her across the face. Ana stumbled backwards. Her dog heaped
out of the bushed, and jumped in front of Ana, growling and snarling
at her father. Without saying a word he turned and ran inside the
house. Ana's mother sprinted out back to find her daughter standing
with her hands over her face sobbing. She reached for Ana, who had
blood all over her hands and face. They walked in the kitchen and
her mother started to clean Ana up. Ana's father rushed by with a
pistol in his right hand and said to Ana,
"I'LL FIX YOUR DAMN DOG!!"
Ana sobbed and yelled pushing past her frantic mother and ran after
her father. Ana stood about 8 feet from her father who was pointing
the gun directly at the dog. The dog's ears were back and was growling
enough to see all his sharp white teeth.
"PLEASE PAPA DON'T! PLEASE! PAPA!" Ana cried out. "DON'T
KILL 'EM, PAPA!!!!"
"SHUT-UP ANA!" he yelled. Right then he pulled the trigger
and a giant sound exploded from the gun. Cody yelped one cry as his
limp body fell back to the ground. Ana screamed at the top of her
lungs. Weeping and sobbing she dove toward the animal lying in the
grass.
"Don't touch him Ana." He said as he raised the gun.
Ana looked back at her father to see him pointing the gun at directly
at her. With tears streaming down her face, Ana slowly stood up and
moved towards the door where her mother was standing, calmly instructing
him to put down the gun. As soon at Ana made it towards the door her
mother grabbed her, yanked her in the house and slammed the back door.
By this time, her three younger brothers had heard all the yelling
and screaming and especially the gun shot. They appeared near the
stairway and kept a safe distance away. Ana's mother grabbed her car
keys and purse and commanded her children to get in the car immediately.
On her way out she grabbed a towel from the kitchen for Ana's nose,
which had kept bleeding and running down her face.
After that horrible Saturday afternoon, Ana had not returned to school
until a week later. Brody of course knew from the first day of Ana's
absent that something had gone wrong. It took Ana a while until she
discussed that Saturday afternoon with Brody. But when she did, Brody
felt extremely sorry for her. He comforted her and supported her.
They talked about it a lot which also brought the two of them together
very quickly. Both Ana and Brody trusted each other with everything,
their thoughts, their feelings, their emotions, their darkest secrets,
and the trauma both of them faced in those few months.
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