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Dear and Love

by Maddy C, Toronto, Ontario, Canada, Age 13

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November 22nd, 2003

Dear Mother,
Dad’s house smells of barbecue sauce. He said his guy friends came over last night. He showed me where to put my suitcase and I flopped down on the double bed.
My new room is powder blue and the bedspread is iris blossom print. I hate it. I liked the orange duvet you bought for me better.

I picked up one of the magazines in the blue room; it was Teen People April last year. I guess Dad had been saving it for me or something.
Remember when we read InStyle together?

Dinner came and Dad wasn’t making anything, I wanted sandwiches but he didn’t have any ham or cheese or… come to think of it, bread. We ordered Chinese.
Miss You,
Lor

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Loraine Williams,
Please see me after class,
Thanks,
Mr. Joe

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Loraine, dear
Honey, I just hope you are finding things well at your Dad’s.
Remember, your parents decided what’s right.
Love Nana

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Dear Mother,
School here is weird. Everyone stared as I plopped my binder on the last empty desk. I arrived half an hour late because Dad lost his palm pilot and couldn’t remember what time school started.

All the teachers are okay, but one of them is strange. He wears red bow ties and winked at me during 5th period study break.
I miss California.
Love,
your daughter Loraine

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Loraine:
Why didn’t you see me yesterday?
Mr. Joe

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Mr. Joe,
See you?
-Loraine

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Loraine:
Yes, you must have received the note from me from Kelly in the office, right?
Mr. Joe

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Mr. Joe,
Yes
-Loraine

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Loraine:
Then why weren’t you there after class?
Mr. Joe

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Mr. Joe
Truthfully, Mr. Joe I couldn’t remember which classroom was yours. I’m honestly sorry. Is it room 386?
-Loraine

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Loraine:
No, 388. I’m sorry, I’d forgotten you were new here. Would you like me to show you around?
-Mr. Joe

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Dear Mother,
Haven’t you been getting my letters?
Why aren’t you writing? You promised we would stay in touch. I miss you Mom
Lor

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Dear Nana
Things are going fine.
Thanks for the socks.
-Loraine
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